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Keep Trying.

This is kind of an interesting idea and there were a few moments where I chuckled in my head.

Overall, however, I could see you didn't really try with your animation. You need to put effort into your work if you want to get high scores and good reviews. You obviously know how to use the program, and you have the skills to make a decent flash, but you aren't allowing yourself to reach a higher level.

Another thing that bothered me was the voice acting. It was good at times when the main character was speaking, because his voice kind of added to the humour, but at the beginning it was just a bit irritating.

You should definitely keep working with Flash. Eventually you will be very good with it. Add some more humour into your comedy flashes, and spend time on the final product.

-* Review Request Club *-

The-Mercenary responds:

Thanks, yea I didn't want to spend a whole lot of time on something that was just kind of animated on impulse. Sorry the voice acting was irritating, its what I was going for with the voices, but its more like an insight joke w/ friends. I probably could have cleaned it up more though.

Alright...

It was decent, but I really don't like sprites. They seem kind of lazy...

Anyway, they parts that weren't sprites weren't even that great either... a couple were a little funny, but that was just one or two. I think you guys should try harder next time.

FlashfireEX responds:

Believe me, most of us tried our hardest.

Well...

I really don't see why this has such a high score, to be honest. I really didn't like the overuse of images that you didn't create. All the artwork you actually did do yourself was poorly done. I see a lot of room for improvement. The concept of your flash was pretty good. I like the song and I like how you used your animation to show the meaning of the song.

So, decent job, but next time I'd like to see 100% your artwork and a little bit of improvement on the animation. I want to see more.

waiyan responds:

thank you for reviewing, but all the images in the flash are created by me using photoshop

BLUNDERFUL

This was the Robot Day flash I was waiting for.

Seriously, I saw the trailer thing about 5 days ago and could wait for it. You did a stunning job! It's my favourite contribution today.

RiverJordan responds:

Lol really? I thought people would be disappointed because i put out trailers like "OMG EPIC BATTLE" and its settled in 2 seconds ...with a butter knife :P

Glad you liked it!

Golly Geee

You have certainly out done yourself

Oliver responds:

I know. :3

Thank you! Finally!

Just what I need to see to make my day better :)
I've been waiting for a while just like everyone else.
And you didn't disappoint.
I just hope the score of this masterpiece rises and doesn't stay at 3.80!

Aeonstars responds:

Nice. I'm glad it made your day. Thanks for the kind review, Makeshift!

Do be honest..

I actually think this should have a pretty high score, just because of how much I laughed.
I favourited it because of how much I laughed.
I gave it a 5 and a 10 because of how much I laughed.
I want to give you an award because of how much I laughed.
I am writing this fucking review, because of how much I laughed.
It was amazing.

ForNoReason responds:

Thank you sir, your words.... they are too kind.

Nice and Solid

We really pulled it off!
Nice job, everyone.
Also, thanks for the coauthor :3

Matt2k8 responds:

No prob dude, you deserved it.

Hopefully You've Gotten Better

They were mehish. I mean, not good enough for newgrounds, but since it was a collaboration of them, i give you a 3.

Melonzors responds:

thanks, i guess... lol mehish

Hello, Friend :)

Nice job essej .

Mooplet responds:

fo sho

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