Makeshift's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Copcicles]

Keep Trying.

This is kind of an interesting idea and there were a few moments where I chuckled in my head.

Overall, however, I could see you didn't really try with your animation. You need to put effort into your work if you want to get high scores and good reviews. You obviously know how to use the program, and you have the skills to make a decent flash, but you aren't allowing yourself to reach a higher level.

Another thing that bothered me was the voice acting. It was good at times when the main character was speaking, because his voice kind of added to the humour, but at the beginning it was just a bit irritating.

You should definitely keep working with Flash. Eventually you will be very good with it. Add some more humour into your comedy flashes, and spend time on the final product.

-* Review Request Club *-

The-Mercenary responds:

Thanks, yea I didn't want to spend a whole lot of time on something that was just kind of animated on impulse. Sorry the voice acting was irritating, its what I was going for with the voices, but its more like an insight joke w/ friends. I probably could have cleaned it up more though.

[B]

Not Good.

you didn't offer anything exciting. I was let down thinking this would be as good as SSS. Still, good effort.

[Clocktopia Art Gallery]

Goooooood

First of all, this should not be in the Movie section! This is an interactive experience, it should be under games.

~ Just kidding. ^__^

you guys did a great job! The art was awesome and the idea was really cool.

[War for Awesometron]

Wonderfuuul

This fits perfectly with the fact that I'm renting the game right now. Excellent work.

[Sixgun Space]

Great, but slightly flawed.

The art was great, especially for being finished in 24 hours. I just had a few problems with it and instead of giving you a big list of things I loved, I thought I should explain the flaws. The big one was that the song ended to early. I was sitting through the last couple parts in silence and it began to get awkward. The other problem I had was that the parts didn't contain enough action. The theme was perfect for gunfights and chases and only half the parts really had something interesting to see. That being said, the art was still good in the others. So you did a great job especially considering the 24 hours given, but it got a bit boring. Can't wait to see the next one and possibly contribute to it. Hopefully I'll have something to show that will make you want to have me in it by then.

8/10
4/10

[Vince The Voodoo doll]

Awesomeness!

I loved the game and even though it didn't exactly relate to the game 100% it was still an awesome flash. Great work. Great work indeed!

[The Kirby Collab]

Alright...

It was decent, but I really don't like sprites. They seem kind of lazy...

Anyway, they parts that weren't sprites weren't even that great either... a couple were a little funny, but that was just one or two. I think you guys should try harder next time.

FlashfireEX responds:

Believe me, most of us tried our hardest.

[The Man Who Cant Be Moved]

Well...

I really don't see why this has such a high score, to be honest. I really didn't like the overuse of images that you didn't create. All the artwork you actually did do yourself was poorly done. I see a lot of room for improvement. The concept of your flash was pretty good. I like the song and I like how you used your animation to show the meaning of the song.

So, decent job, but next time I'd like to see 100% your artwork and a little bit of improvement on the animation. I want to see more.

waiyan responds:

thank you for reviewing, but all the images in the flash are created by me using photoshop

['Rageous 7]

Perrfeccttt

I looooved it. There was a little room for improvement in a part or two, but it was amazing overall. The sound, the art: perfect.

[Patchman: Robo-Rival]

BLUNDERFUL

This was the Robot Day flash I was waiting for.

Seriously, I saw the trailer thing about 5 days ago and could wait for it. You did a stunning job! It's my favourite contribution today.

RiverJordan responds:

Lol really? I thought people would be disappointed because i put out trailers like "OMG EPIC BATTLE" and its settled in 2 seconds ...with a butter knife :P

Glad you liked it!