Keep Trying.
This is kind of an interesting idea and there were a few moments where I chuckled in my head.
Overall, however, I could see you didn't really try with your animation. You need to put effort into your work if you want to get high scores and good reviews. You obviously know how to use the program, and you have the skills to make a decent flash, but you aren't allowing yourself to reach a higher level.
Another thing that bothered me was the voice acting. It was good at times when the main character was speaking, because his voice kind of added to the humour, but at the beginning it was just a bit irritating.
You should definitely keep working with Flash. Eventually you will be very good with it. Add some more humour into your comedy flashes, and spend time on the final product.
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